The following spelling errors make fos a small selection
I found while reading some few select parts. Many are
single letter changes, other are more subtle. Some are
likely to be due to uncountable nouns.
I believe there are way too many "may" in the text. They should
probably be replaced by "might", "can", or "could"
A major issue lies in the repeated use of "parameter" for
items like "--password". The accepted nomen is "switch"
for such entities. In particular, '-k' is the switch,
"LOCALHOST" is the argument, and